Prediction dialogue for if the feather in the trailer is the white pen of hope

Dialogue for equipping:

Hammer of Justice defeated:

Ralsei: Um, I really think Susie should have it…

Susie: …I won’t let you down, Old Man.

Noelle: Uhh, thanks Kris…?

Hammer of Justice not defeated:

Ralsei: This feather…

Susie: Hell is this supposed to do?

Noelle: Uhh, thanks Kris…?

Attempting to de-equip it from Susie after defeating the Hammer of Justice:

Susie: I…think I’ll hold on to it.

Attempting to sell or throw away

Hammer of Justice defeated:

Susie: Hey! What the hell are you doing?!

Hammer of Justice not defeated:

Ralsei: Kris, maybe we shouldn’t…

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That’s a whole lotta words
Too bad I’m not readin em

Guys I slashed jay too hard and he’s dead what do I do

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That man had a family, Jack.

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I don’t know how I did it it was just a playful tap I’m sorry don’t send me to hell

No hell is full there's not enough room :(

So I’m going to heaven!?

:raised_hand:

:raised_back_of_hand:

No, you're stuck on Earth

this is actually pretty good dialogue.i feel like this should be a key though not a weapon

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Yeah I can see that, but I saw Susie’s prophecy and it has her holding a sword, and with how swords and writing utensils are connected in Deltarune I thought weapon would work a little better. (That and I wanted to write equip dialogue)

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So I can’t die?

Oh this is cool, sounds exactly like it would be in the real game

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Yeah sure you get Cain's punishment now run off to Asia I'm busy

funi that thou made a whole image for htis

I like this dialogue, but it also kinda just immediately makes the justice axe obsolete which is a bit of a problem

NO, SUSIE!
THE PEN IS METAPHORICAL!
DON'T FOLLOW THE TAIL SUSIE!
SUSIE!
-:gerson:

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Maybe it's for Kris?
Then again, we do have the Winglade, which is confirmed to be a white quill pen...

winglade's not important enough, I think it is the pen hope (penelope)

"I have a funny feeling that right when Susie is about to grab the pen that friends tail will swipe it away :friend:"

nah its the chapter gimmick :yourtakingtoolong:

guys WILD THEORY:
WHAT IF every chapter is THEMED around a genre????
Card Kingdom is like medival stuff
Cyber world is cyberpunk/sci-fi
tv world is the "famousland" trope thing
the dark sanctuaries are like lore
and flower king world looks eastern-style