Just edited go look at it
Anyways i think i really should pay more attention to this.
>:|
Itās okay, but yeah, try to be gender neutral, like the writing in the game has been
I go with the it/its pronouns since I see the knight as a very inhuman (inmonster?) creature even though I think it used to be Dess
Also are you like implying Gaster could be the knight or something or did you just put him there to be spooky and youāre just referencing your knight is nobody theory
As for the flowers, I think it would be a bit bland if they had similar flower with face designs as Flowey, if thatās what you mean, but at the very least the golden flower will definitely have parallels with Flowey at least
Asgoreās trident having a possible light world equivalent is a good point
A gardening tool could be it, those often come in the form of a handle and prongs, and arenāt a weapon in the light world
Asgore Runs Over Dess (With Lyrics)
Most definitely yes. Miss Mizzle already foreshadowed one of them:
The Bluest Flower, A disciple of my speech. Shy to no camera, And a specimen of Elegance and kindness. Should you meet, Please give my regards.
You, literally saying:
A trident will turn into Asgoreās trident
pitchfork
Yeah, something like that, or perhaps something like a wooden cultivator, thatās what I was imagining
The cultivator would also be closer to the kind of transformation of pencil to sword (not to say that that has to be some sort of pattern, it isnāt)