Aside from generally iffy/sloppy writing, there are a few instances of erroneous or incorrect information, such as:
Kris performs various ACTs from their ACT command menu, which does not use TP and can help SPARE an enemy.
Some ACTs definitely use TP. I would LOVE to fix this myself, but the page is protected, so I can't. Something should probably be done about this.
Yeah this is a problem
What does protected entail exactly is it based on trust level or is it a different system entirely it?
Thanks for bringing it up, I've replaced it with:
Kris performs various ACTs from their ACT command menu, which usually does not cost TP and can help SPARE an enemy.
And I balanced the following sentence below it as well.
As for editing, I'm pretty sure anyone that has confirmed their email should be able to edit that article.
Could you specify certain areas that you think have poor writing? It'd be useful so we know what might need rewording
Some of the lines in it, like
They are the quiet first hero of the prophecy, who becomes braver in later Chapters.
are a little weirdly worded and almost sound like opinions rather than just information, but it's pretty minor.
I believe this was brought up before by Mabiee a while back, but it was instead in the context of Kris not having character development.
My reason was that, at the start of Chapter 1, much of ?????? was Kris being surprised by the Eye Puzzle's completion and Lancer's ambush. In Chapter 2, Kris is fine with being alone to finish Spamton's deal, since they ask Susie and Ralsei to stay behind.
I'm thinking the third paragraph could probably be merged into it as an alternative, or to revise something with all the party members...
Becomes braver? More like becomes eviler because knight association
character development would've been nice for kris
They already have character development, it's the sentence that got highlighted.
ok lel