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Deltarune Discussion
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I've made an AU about Kris Susie, and Noelle having a sleepover after chapter three, and I really need to formulate ideas of what they're doing at Noelle's house, how Carol allowed them there, and how Kris will stop Susie getting codes.

Okay, here's what I've got:

  1. Church is on Sunday, so they can have the sleepover
  2. They have it at Kris's house because there's vital info at Noelle's
  3. The sleepover is a diversion for some plan at Carol's house

But here are some issues:

  1. Susie will for sure what to find the codes and forfeit the sleepover
  2. Sans and toriel scheduled their little date that day
  3. A sleepover is kind of a weak diversion (susie will still want the codes)
  4. What are they even scheming in the first place?

Here are some solutions:

  1. The knight doesn't kidnap undyne since they know that'll mess up the diversion
  2. There's some huge issue that's messed up so Carol and Kris have to scheme
  3. And the sleepover is at Kris's house

i need help with these things:

  1. What's the issue that messed it up??
  2. Where is toriel?

thanks

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Toriel BEFRIENDED Sans that morning, and hasn't left the store yet because they're stuck in a pun loop.

Also, what kind of issue do you mean? The "getting the egg negates the complete chapter without issue trophy" kind?

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No, I'm talking about what evil plan thing should Kris be doing while the sleepover is happening. The sleepover is a diversion, but I'm thinking it's kind of a weak one

I just want a sleepover with some lore stuff, that's all :P

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Kris is plotting what to do with Asgore's Flower shop and how best to carry over Flowey to Deltarune from Undertale.

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Also, have the events of Chapter 4 taken place (the Dark Santuaries) or no?

If so, Kris may be plotting how best to take Jackenstein to Castle Town without anyone noticing.

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No, it's after chapter three, on Saturday

I think I've sorted it out, I just want to know why Kris would invite them for a sleepover and what Kris is scheming, I've got the Yuri scenes, the first third, I just want ideas on what Kris is planning and if this is some diversion. Or Kris just wanted to be with their friends

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Hear me out: Kris is plotting to open ANOTHER TV World and play with Noelle, Susie and Ralsei on TV Time, assuming Tenna was fixed.

And what do you mean by "Yuri scenes"?

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