A song i made for my game (its sad)

its so sad :(

its too sad

not that sad ngl

bruh

hehe

did you even listen

obviously not

I did though

you have no ears then

/j

but fr, idk if this is any good (i feel like its my best piece yet) so please give me a rating

I almost said "4/10" I ment 4/5 lol

slow it down, make the drums more like the ones in flower king, and make the viloins slower and deeper then it's perfect.

Assuming you're using FL, you might wanna use squidfont for the drums
It has a good orchestral drumkit.
additionally, I find the melody to be not particularly memorable nor overly emtoional, which probably aren't ideal if this is meant to be a sad song.

he's using lmms

ah
no clue what that is
if it uses sf2s tho
i still recommend

it does I think

I wouldn't know because I don't use it though

i was using sgm POWER kit

yeah i figured
it's an aight kit, but not the best for emotional bits

the reason i used that kit was because

its the exact kit (and the exact pattern, but slowed) from a character theme. the character theme is generally happy, and i added the drums slowed to make the player remember that theme (as the theme for the character has something to do with this song).

Hm.
The logic is good,
But generally just having the melody carry over and sound sad will suffice
Because sgm power typically sounds a bit ass when slow

YOUR TOO SAD